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new years

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No stars shine tonight
Clouds covering New Year's sky.
So very lonely--
I wrote this New Year's night/morning. The weather that night pretty much matches how I feel these days; lonely and smothered.
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atsy's avatar
This is very good. I like the concept behind it... one thing I would suggest though is possibly finding another word to replace covering, because it almost can be pronounced two different ways: co-ver-ing or cover-ing. Because although it is properly pronounces as three syllables as you use it, human dialect often may sound it as two.